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Thursday, May 10, 2012

Mother's Day


My Mum Is The Best!
Having a Mum like mine is like water to a flower and air to a balloon. My mum is the best because she tries her best to spend time with me and my brothers even though she is really tired. My mum is a single mum, she gets up very early at 5:00am and gets me and my baby brother ready for school and drops me and my little brother off to my nana’s house, then she goes to work. My mum gets home like about 8:00 or 9:00 at night, so after school I go back to my nana’s house and wait until she comes back from work. When we get home she makes dinner or sometimes she buys dinner and then goes to sleep. She doesn’t get much sleep because my baby brother gets up once or twice in the night. I love my mum so much, my mum is not only my mum but she is my friend too who I can share things with. I thank God for my mum. No one will ever replace my mum. I don’t know how to thank my mum. I love spending time with my mum. I have a very special bond with her. My mum is so special, you are simply the best! Mum is a special word it's the loveliest I have ever heard!
I LOVE MY MUM WITH ALL MY HEART AND I WILL ALWAYS!
By Salome

24 comments:

  1. I think that this story is very beautiful I love it in fact I think it is very very wonderful

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  2. HI SALOME just looking and reading this makes me want to cry but sadly I won't, Nah jokes. HAHAHA thanks for being a friend and this is just so amazing...

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  3. Salome I think that was a heartwarming story about your Mum, she sounds like she is always all over the place and it was a lovely story.
    Keep up the great work.

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  4. Hi Salome that was a beautiful amazing passage about your mum. You must really love her. I would probably bet 1 million dollars that both you would sacrifice your life for each other.

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    1. Yes Sione Dale thank you for your comment and I am sure you and your mum have a really special bond!

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  5. Salome your mum's love for you is unstoppable. It is a touching story. What a great Mother you have.

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    1. Thank you so much Siniva she means a lot to me!


      Salome

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  6. Hello Salome I love how you describe your mum. I like it how you said I love my mum so much, my mum is not only my mum but she is my friend too who I can share things with. Keep up the good work, and I am sure that no one will replace your mum that's how special she is to you :)

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  7. Thank you Sonya I am sure your mum is very special to you too.

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    1. Thank you God bless your mother with love
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  8. What a great description of your amazing mum. We are all touched by the emotion you showed for your mum in the way you describe her.

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    1. Big thank you to you Mrs Moodley I am pretty sure you are a fanatastic and amazing mother to your children!

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  9. Wow Salome that is a great mother's day recount you did. Keep that up Salome. Well done.

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  10. Hi Salome that was a beautiful amazing passage about your mum.I hope your mum and you had a lovely day on that day. Keep that up Salome and well done.

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  11. Salome I very enjoyed your mothers day recount keep it up and you know what Salome I almost cried on your story:):-)

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  12. I very like how you have put more information on your work. I am sure that your mum would like it. Next time put more great words on your piece of work.

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    1. Thank you so much Valensia your mum is a beautiful and amazing lady!

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  13. Thank you all so much for commenting and giving me advice for my next piece of writing. All your mothers should be so special to you people. They have a love that will never end they will not stop loving you. Again thank you so much!

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  14. WOW salome I ALMOST cried through the whole story God bless you and your Mum and make sure no one would ever sperate you and your mother because and and your mothers love is very close.

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  15. That was an incredible description of your mum, I hope your mum loved it, Keep up the great work, hope to see more of your work.

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    1. Thank you Deja for your comment. Yes my Mum did love it she almost cried. Again Thank You

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  16. Salome your mum must being loving you and your brothers I Love your story Salome keep up the good work.

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